Chapter 227 : Poison

Hi guys, I am new translator, nasir. I did this using google, freetranslation and jisho …etc also i am not very proficient in english. I have written in front of the sentences in which I have problem with translation. Anyone who is good in japanese can tell me my mistakes .well….. here the chapter.enjoy

also thanks to yoraikun to let me post this on his blog.

CHAPTER 227: POISON
The rope that had connected the caterpillar and the carriage had broken, and the carriage was gone.

Kiel and the others were nowhere to be seen.

“What happened!?” (Naofumi)

As soon as the Caterpillar saw me, it quickly ran towards me.

It mumbled something while staring and clinging to me.

“I was attacked when I was peddling! The children who were riding in the carriage were kidnapped? Eh? That’s not it?” (Taniko)

Taniko tried to understand the Caterpillar, but she did not seem to understand its words well.

It was only being transmitted that something had happened.

“Where was the place!?” (Ren)

Ren asked Taniko.

“Well…” (Taniko)

“It should be in the direction where this fellow came from?” (Ren)

“Probably.” (Taniko)

Ren traced back the caterpillar’s foot prints and started running.

“Oh, wait! Don’t leave me!” (Female Knight)

The female knight chased after him.

But that wouldn’t be enough.

“Filo, go with Ren.” (Naofumi)

“Kue!”(Filo)

The filo which was next to me, on my instruction, started running to accompany them.

It would be best if the case was resolved with this, but….

I suppressed the uneasiness in my chest. (not sure about this)

“First, we’re treating this guy. Call Rat.” (Naofumi)

While chanting recovery magic, I told Taniko to call Rat.

Recovery magic was not very effective on monsters. In this case, natural recovery or recovery by medicine would work better.

Taniko ran to Rat’s laboratory.

Suddenly, a problem started.

The caterpillar started to behave violently and tried to return the way he came until Rat arrived.

It was hard to say, but he had a powerful desire to become strong. He grieved over his cowardliness for not going after Ren. (cannot make a better translation than this)

“Okay? What happened?” (Rat)

“Apparently, thieves attacked the carriage and kidnapped the slaves.” (Naofumi)

After hearing the commotion, Gaelion came flying.

The caterpillar began to tell something to Gaelion.

“Hmm… Hmm… What?” (Gaelion)

“Did you understand something? ” (Naofumi)

“The fact is that there was a surprise attack that came from both the front and back” (Gaelion)   (this took the longest to translate and i think its still not good.someone can check this for me)

“What do you mean?” (Naofumi)

For a moment, I thought that the protection shields that the slaves received were rotten.

To be frank, they are much stronger than any ordinary adventurers.

I thought that the uncle of Imia class up was done and that they were defeated by smaller force, although it seems to have been different. (this may be wrong)

Still, I would like to investigate thoroughly.

Motoyasu, who was not here, came to my mind first, but I think it’s different.

Reasonably, this was Itsuki’s way of doing things.

However, a question still remained.

Itsuki, despite his selfishness, is all about his sense of justice.

This was my evaluation as a guy who investigates thoroughly.

However, even the possibility that Itsuki is moving with the mystery theory like Ren and Motoyasu is conceivably sufficient, because the Itsuki that I saw in Zeltbur got broken in various ways.

Even though it remained the same and didn’t appear, I think it’s really insidious.

These events were extremely annoying.

This bad feeling was doubled because the former Motoyasu did not hide anything that did not seem pretty.

Well, I think isn’t it Perfect-Hidden-Justice.

Huh… Anyway, it was unfortunate that Itsuki did not get captured.

Through my work, the former Ren and Motoyasu have become better already.

They changed drastically, but the way they are now is much better.

“Caterpillar also says he was attacked and fled for his life.” (Gaelion)

After conveying his message properly, caterpillar felt relieved and lost all his strength. (this is the best meaning i can make)

Dead! I thought and checked his pulse.

He was breathing and not dead. He probably pushed himself in the emergency.

Well, he reached me properly and lost consciousness in a reassuring place.

But… why did Ren go to such a dangerous place?

Is it dangerous?

I need to rush after them.

It can’t be helped. I confirmed that Rat is coming, and I get ready to go out.

“Filorials.” (Naofumi)

” ” “KUE!””” (Filorials)

“Also, Gaelion, Rishia, and Alta will go with me!” (Naofumi)

“Yes.” (Gaelion)

“Okay!”(Rishia)

” ” “KUE!?””” (Filorials)

“What is it? Are you dissatisfied? The remaining members are to guard the village! Maintain the caution until I return!” (Naofumi)

I led the group while I rode on the back of Gaelion.

The Filorials and the others ran and followed me from the ground.

Though I caught up with Ren and the others before long from the sky, as expected, there was nothing in the spot where Kiel and the others were attacked.

I let Gaelion track them by smell, but he was not able to track them even halfway.

The sun had set, and I was forced to abandon the search.

Ren was not done yet, but he finally resigned after I warned him to not let a second accident occur.

I returned to the village, counted both the number of monsters and slaves, and began to prepare for dinner.

Certainly, the numbers have been reduced little by little recently.

It’s not that I didn’t notice, but I thought that peddling took time.

Now’s not the time to look away.

The Slave Crests were still functioning and have not been removed.

The numbers have not decreased, and they should be in range according to what I remember.

Yet, I do not know their whereabouts.

Because no conclusive evidence had been found today, I felt that the air in the village was heavier.

Will Raphtalia be okay? Is she training well? I pray that nothing has happened.

But, I still need to issue her instructions to come back since a problem has occurred.

The problem is… whether the instructions will arrive.

I cut today’s material with a kitchen knife and threw it into the pan.

Though I stewed it, it’s being boiled. It doesn’t stick to the hand so much.

Ren also seemed restless.

But the situation would not improve for the better even if we searched at night.

Because I could not calm down, I cooked.

Heroes are powerless at this time, and there’s no chance for me to do anything.

For now, we can only wait for something to happen. (cannot make a better translation)

“Oh! What’s with this?” I said while trying the soup that I cooked today. (Naofumi)

It’s dangerous!

Alerts sound in my head.

“Huh…” (Naofumi)

What is it? Did I add something dangerous to the dish to make it a failure?

There were no such things so far, and the soup connoisseur worked in my sight.

Toxic substance. Toxicity… middle degree. Breathing hindrance. Natural poison.

I used an antidote, and the detoxification magic cured me immediately.

What?

No, no one could make such a dangerous poison with the materials right here.

Did I mess up and make a dangerous thing with alchemy by mistake?

“Is it done?” The slave in charge of cooking asked while seeing the soup. (Slave)

“No, looks like I failed.” (Naofumi)

“Eh? When it smells so good?” (Slave)

“Indeed.” (Naofumi)

While saying so, I wash away the soup with a bottle of water.

Danger!

The same alerts from before were reflected in my field of vision.

What!?

Was it the water?

I carefully asked the connoisseur about the water.

“Hey, where was this water taken from?” (Naofumi)

“What? From the well that we always use…” (Slave)

But what do I say that it is mixing or it is poisonous?

I had an unpleasant hunch.

“It’s useless!” (Naofumi)

“I don’t get it.” (Slave)

“Anyway, it’s no use and it’s painful.” (Naofumi)

When I looked outside at the dining room, a Filorial picked a quarrel with a slave and prevented him from drinking the well water.

Filorials have wild intuition. He is talking, since I’m not there, and interfering.

The Filorial did well. I will prepare a reward for him later.

“All members, do not drink the water.” (Naofumi)

I gave instructions in a loud voice.

“What happened?” (Slaves)

“There is a possibility that a poison was mixed into the well” (Naofumi)

“Is that true?” (Slaves)

“It is like that, and I will investigate it in a little bit.” (Naofumi)

I called for Rat, who finished treatment of caterpillar, to investigate the well and the nearby river.

The result was that poison was mixed in both.

Fortunately, the bio-plant was detoxifying, and the poison won’t soak into the earth.

However, if you look closely, fish-type monsters were dead and floated in the river.

The sun had set, and in the dark, the search for the criminal who poisoned the river did not go well.

However, I found a corpse of a Demi-Human adventurer upstream.

“Is this fellow the culprit?” (Naofumi)

“I don’t know.” (Rat)

Rat checked the corpse like a doctor.

Did this demi-human pour the poison into my village? Even if I’m mistaken, this person is certainly not from my village.

In the village which I command, for the time being, I seem to be their religion’s God.

Could it be the people of the Schildwelt or Schildfrieden?

I cannot pinpoint it from the corpse, which won’t speak.

“Earl, look over here.” (Rat)

Rat pointed at the corpse of the demi-human.

“There’s a paper in his hand. Something is written on it.” (Rat)

“Can you read it?” (Naofumi)

“It is the judgment of the person who calls himself a god. But, aren’t these letters from Melromarc’s official language?” (Rat)

“What?” (Naofumi)

Wait a minute, did the radicals of the Religion of the Shield attack me?

No, that’s doubtful. It’s Melromarc’s official language.

The official language of Schildwelt or Schildfrieden should have been used if that was the case.

“Looks like you wrote and translated it well. It’s feeling that you got used to by understanding the habit of the characters, right?” (cannot find any better translation)

“Such a thing?” (Naofumi)

“Yes, also…”(rat)

Rat picked up a medicine and dripped it onto the chest of the demi-human.

Then, on the chest of the body,… A slave crest shone faintly.

It was a slave crest that disappears upon death. They intended to cover it, but they cannot deceive us.

“It’s a slave I… Oh, it is white.” (Naofumi)

“Well.” (Rat)

For a demi-human Schildwelt or Schildfrieden slave to poison and then commit suicide for a religious reason… would be impossible.

I heard in that in such countries, demi-human and human slaves have the same family/tribe crest.

The possession of the paper, the mystery of the concealed slave crest, there must be a hidden, decisive reason.

Moreover, it was obvious that their wrath is aimed at me…

It seems that they want me to be suspected.

I will let you make a human slave if it is me.

What a childish trick.

The one which made the criminal demi-humans affiliates or gave a bad impression and stood up…

“Bury it carefully.” (Naofumi)

“Is that okay?” (Rat)

“He was a victim. He would have gone through a lot of hardships so far. I will treat the dead politely at least.” (Naofumi)

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133 Responses to Chapter 227 : Poison

  1. frenzy85 says:

    … I don’t mean to be rude, but tl quality aside, could you do something about the capitalization and terminologies/names? When I say terminology, I specifically mean “firorails”.

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    • Nasir says:

      oh.i checked terminology and fixed it.i keep on using firorails.thanks

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      • Code says:

        If you’d like the help of an English speaker to edit your translations before releasing them, I’d be happy to help.

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        • code117 says:

          I’m pretty sure alot of us would also help.
          Thanks for this, probably should have said this first.

          I had also had wondered if somepeople had put off translating because written English wasn’t their strong point. As long as someone can get us from the garbled mess that is machine translation, which has almost no structure, many of us would go from there.

          I could read and understand of all of this easily, so again thank you.

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        • hell5atan says:

          If you’re offering to help with editing i need help with the Valentine’s special

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  2. wrathfulfury says:

    very good, please keep up the good work

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  3. Yoraikun, looks like Kookie have a problem with her laptop…can you please take over ch 223

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  4. Magikarp says:

    This needs an editor, pronto.

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  5. Yoraikun says:

    Yes, wordpress has the function to let pretty much anyone post if I change their account status to Author. I sent invitations to do so to Firo’s Ahoge, Muel and uz3r013 all the way in November, but it may have been ignored.

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  6. lazypioneer says:

    oh god a new translator❤

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  7. lazypioneer says:

    The firo which was near me,on my instruction starts running and accompanies them.
    ->
    Firo which was near me starts running and accompanies them on my instruction

    also you might want to change the 1st letter of the names to uppercase.

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  8. Haha says:

    Feels stiff and confusing… prolly needs an editor to smooth things out..

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  9. gohanish says:

    welcome back

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  10. asarus says:

    hello guys can somebody tell where i can read the chapter 223 ?

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  11. Zeke says:

    3 days to go for yoraikun! translating is nice . . .

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  12. Another good read. Although there were some problems with the grammar, Its not much of a big deal when your mind fixes any error it encounters. Anyway, Good Job Nasir! Keep translating!

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  13. Anon says:

    Too bad. The translation is so bad that I’m losing interest in this series.. I can do much better if only I hv the raws. Lol.. So 4 hours of work eh..? Well, great job.

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    • 黒曜石ペガサス says:

      So why doesn’t this person help instead of wasting their time full of themselves trolling? Helping is so much better than whining… (I did 254 on ばかーつき so I promise I’m not a hypocrite…たぶん)

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      • hell5atan says:

        Tell me about it there was a guy who even called me a faggot on the comments on my blog

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        • Code says:

          Sorry for replying to this comment rather than the one above where you responded to my original post, but for some reason it won’t let me reply to that one and I didn’t see a way to contact you on your own wordpress. I would certainly be willing to help with Valentine of the Shield Hero. I don’t know any Japanese, but I am a native English speaker and have the time to do editing. What’s the best way to carry on this conversation?

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        • hell5atan says:

          I’m not familiar on how to use wordpress but i seriously need an editor specially if you see my work

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        • Tee says:

          So, has Code become your editor?If you’d like it, I can help too.But I also can’t read/understand Japanese, so maybe I just do some grammar or spelling check, although I may not as good as Code, because I’m not a native English speaker.

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        • hell5atan says:

          Not a native English speaker either I’m Filipino and no I’ve no editor yet i don’t know how i can give access to my blog

          PS. As of the moment i can’t stop playing games

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        • Tee says:

          Hwa?Then how can I help?Or maybe you can give a file to me via email and I could email you back the edited version?That way you can read it first and decide if you like it or not before posting it

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        • hell5atan says:

          I’m new to wordpress maybe I’ll ask you how to do it

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        • Tee says:

          Your reply imply that at least you can pause it LOL

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        • hell5atan says:

          I actually deleted his comment

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        • Tee says:

          Too bad I never use wordpress. maybe googling it? and aren’t we bothering yoraikun with this chat?should we move somewhere else?but I can’t post any comment at your place

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        • hell5atan says:

          Oh well let’s continue this comedian some other time i have a very important appointment tomorrow so I’m hitting the hay

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    • Frenzy85 says:

      The raws are available online for free.
      http://ncode.syosetu.com/n3009bk/

      Good luck…?

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    • AsianOtakuGuy says:

      Its a web novel <_< just search google with the japanese Title and youll find it no time (thats what I did) or you can also click the link that guy posted a bit down a ways v

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    • nyan says:

      please at least appreciate yoraikun`s translation .. dont fag yourself because of his translation. he’s doing the best that he can to translate this .. and i think you should die in a car accident *runs away*

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  14. Mario says:

    I see, Bitch again. She is going to use conflicts and war, because she wants to have the throne, but since Melromarc right now is strong she needs to make it weaker.
    Itsuki is a pawn in this…basically the same thing the other church do the last time, but itsuki is the only real hero. Itsuki stupid as always. He really wants to be god himself.

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  15. André Filipe says:

    Well first of all thanks for the translations Nasir and good luck on your tests Yoraikun!!!!
    I am not a native english speaker (from Brasil here) but i managed to understand everything just fine, it is actually fairly well done.
    Keep up the good work i just love this novel and was already going into an abstinence crisis.

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  16. kirindas says:

    Thanks for the release!

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  17. somedude01 says:

    Firo became a mexican

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  18. Nova says:

    guys were can read the chapter 223-226

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  19. Larxen says:

    anyone knows the ETA: for 223-226 chapters?

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  20. some random guy says:

    english is not my native language but i can read it just fine, thx for the translations 😄😄😄😄

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  21. Templar says:

    What the hell? This chapter?? Seriously??? You need to redo it man ;(

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    • Hero of the Book says:

      Seriously? He did this on his own time. He did a great job for someone whose first language isn’t English. If you are going to complain about it why not translate some chapters and show everyone how it’s done?

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    • aristo999999999 says:

      How about you redoing it? Or at least helping editing it. I can read and follow it just fine. To me there is no need for free translation to be very good. As long as you can still follow the story it is acceptable.

      If you want very good translation, expect it on paid/licensed version. And not so good things encourage you to actually buy the licensed version once they are out.

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      • The Tinniest Snowman says:

        I feel like I need to read this chapter to see what everyone is talking about. Sadly I don’t want to spoil things for meself just yet.

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  22. Drabe says:

    thanks for the chapter

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  23. Anon says:

    Thank You , but please do Chapter 223 ??

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  24. AsianOtakuGuy says:

    DOMO ARIGATO GOZAIMASHITA YORAI-KUN

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  25. k says:

    thank for the update

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  26. aristo999999999 says:

    Thank you for the update.

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  27. Korbo says:

    “que!”(firo)

    Yoraikun goes on break, and Firo starts speaking Spanish…shit has gotten real.

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  28. lugh says:

    Thank you very much

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  29. Zeke says:

    the day of reckoning is at hand!!!!!! yoraikun. today is 18….

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    • Omnipwnage says:

      I don’t know if you mean to say that ‘he’s coming back to translate on the 18th’ or ‘happy Birthday! You’re 18!’ but I can stand behind either of those being a good thing😀

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  30. Falinmer says:

    223 is done, Kookie has it up on his page. Any idea who’s doing 225? It’s not registered to anyone but it’s partially done.

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  31. Mark says:

    Thank you guys again for the awesome translation! Looking forward to the next one and the possible culprit… somehow I am banking it is Bow-brat with some nefarious group backing him. Maybe remnants of the 3-Saints church?

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  32. The Tinniest Snowman says:

    Okay after doing my own google translate so I finally read this chapter (note those google translation are not meant for human eyes, ow) I really hope Naofumi’s anger will increase because of this, I want to see a bloody …bloody battle…with the bow hero. I hope it is the bow hero anyways.

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    • The Tinniest Snowman says:

      I just realized that this sounds like a dis to this chapter being translated, but what I meant was that I did a google translation of 225 because it wasn’t up yet.

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    • Tilaze says:

      Unfortunately it will probably just go the same way the encounters with the previous heroes went. Something like he tries to talk him down, expose bitch for who she is, and Raphtalia comes back out of nowhere to save the day.
      I wonder why killing one of the four heroes is such bad juju when a new hero could just be summoned afterwards.

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      • The Tinniest Snowman says:

        Yeah, but don’t they need to kill all 4 to summon more? Or am I thinking or something different.

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        • just a person says:

          Your correct they would have to kill all 4 to summon new heroes, trash points that out early on to the spear bullying Naofumi

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  33. Xias says:

    Just a little correction regarding the names of the city adn countries:
    Zerutoburu -> Zeltbur
    Silt Welt -> Schildwelt
    Shirudo Furiden-> Schildfrieden

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  34. mony122 says:

    Hey yoria kun still not finished with exams ????
    If you didn’t then thats a lot of exams mam i hope you do well

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  35. Dawg says:

    This translation is bad. I’m not trying to shit on the guy. I understand that his first language isn’t English. But still, this is just bad.
    I don’t know yet how this differs from the raw, I’ll have to look at the chapter in Japanese to see. But at the very least, there are far far FAR too many issues with the English in this. Anyone that thinks this reads fine is either bad at English too, or is lying to others and themselves.
    I kinda want to print this out and go through it all with red ink. But sadly, I don’t have the time. So at the very least I’ll point out a few of the more obvious problems.

    1. If there is a line you have a problem with, post the Japanese version of it next to it, or better yet, make a footnote of it. That way people who know better won’t have to search the entire raw chapter for that line.

    2. If you know someone who’s a native speaker of English. Run your stuff through them. If you truly want to improve, Find someone brutally honest. Compliments rarely help people improve. Criticism does(Constructive Criticism). At the very least, people here should point out every mistake and you should quietly look over each of them and mark it down.

    3. Always capitalize the first word of a sentence, the letter I(i) when it’s by itself, or with a person or place’s name. Far too many examples so I’ll just point out one case:
    “” “good?”(rat) “” Should be “” “Good?”(Rat) “”

    4. The above example has another problem: It’s entire context is wrong. Rat is saying: 「良いの?」
    Which can be translated as ‘Good’, but there’s the の and a question mark. So in reality she’s asking if it’s okay. So “” “Good?”(Rat) “” should be “” “Is that okay?”(Rat) “”

    There’s much more I need to point out, but it will require a lot of patience and time on my part. I know I might sound harsh, but you don’t need kind baby words, you need cold hard truth to really improve yourself.

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    • Nasir says:

      well.i donot mind.I felt like doing it and I did it.here my replay to problems you pointed out..😛

      1.At first I did that, but in the end, I did not like it and deleted those.😉

      2.Well, my English is not as bad as in the chapter. its was my first translation and I forgot to proofread it.I am also doing next chapter and I assure you that will have much less grammatic mistakes.

      3.I did not focus that much on those mistakes. I will correct that in the next chapter.

      4.You might not know, but I do not even know a word of Japanese so i cannot help it.If you can understand the story, then that’s fine by me…

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      • wen2jia1wei3 says:

        Hey Nasir! I got permission from Yoraikun to help edit.

        For #1, can you please include? I can then maybe help you.

        #2, #3, Do your best, and I’m here to help🙂

        #4, I could actually figure out that “Good?” was supposed to be “Is that good/okay” from context. But that is a big edit. Are you okay with me making big edits like that?
        For example: “At such a time, heroes are powerless. It is rare that I can do anything.” –>
        “Heroes are powerless at this time, and there’s no chance for me to do anything.”

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  36. Ingro says:

    Thank you.

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  37. Juan Andres says:

    the waiting game begins once more.

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  38. goblinrou says:

    Ah lots of shieldbros chapters to start 2015!

    Situation getting serious.

    Thx a lot for the translations!

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  39. Abatis says:

    “Looks like you wrote and translated it well. It’s feeling that you got used to by understanding the habit of the characters, right?” (cannot find any better translation)

    This may just be me blowing smoke out of my ass, but I believe she’s saying that Melromarc’s language is very different to others, like Japanese is to a English person. So the person who wrote the message knew the language and how to write the “kanji” characters well enough for it to NOT look like a four-year-old wrote it or sound like he used a Siltwelt->Melromarc dictionary.

    “Looks like he wrote and translated it well. It’s a feeling, like he got used to it by understanding how the characters work, yes?” (Rat)

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    • wen2jia1wei3 says:

      You’re on the right track Abatis, but the entire sentence is so warped due to the poor machine-translation that there’s really no point in editing it T_T

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    • Abatis says:

      I will let you make a human slave if it is me.

      What a childish trick.

      The one which made the criminal demi-humans affiliates or gave a bad impression and stood up…

      Again, I may be completely wrong, but the first line sounds like he’s quoting what his enemies are saying about him, so:
      “I would let you make a human a slave if it were up to me.”

      The last line sounds more like he’s saying his enemies have appeared:
      The ones who made the criminal demi-human groups, who gave bad publicity have stood up…

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      • wen2jia1wei3 says:

        That’s a good interpretation. I interpreted it as:

        “It seems that they want me to be suspected.
        ‘If it’s Naofumi, he’ll make you a human slave.’
        What a childish trick.
        The criminal who made the demi-humans servile and gave off a bad aura stood up.”

        I think the last line is Naofumi being ironic and calling himself badass.
        Well, without raws or a good translation, this is only speculation.

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  40. Thank you for the chapter!!😄

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  41. zeant blaze says:

    Is there any re-translation for this one? I’ve tried to re-translate this one, but since I never learn Japanese until now, so I don’t know if it right. Feel free to check it here.
    https://app.box.com/s/mbmvih8h4lrjm5ov5dg3xjkey8euw28c.
    Well, if I don’t supposed to give a download link here. I’m sorry and feel free to delete this post
    Ah, and if there anything wrong with my translation. Please tell me. I really need someone to proofread this one.

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